Please give me some feedback and a score, I really appreciated the help!

The maps illustrate the differences between a school structure in 2004 and the renovation plan of that school in 2024.

Overall we can clearly see that the 2024 school will be able to hold more student than the previous version. The increase in capacity is mainly due to an additional school building and another car park on the northeast side of the site.

Firstly, the scenic of the school will be changed drastically in 2024 with the size reduction of the sports field. Placed in the north end of the school in 2004, the sports field will be relocated in the east side parallel to the school building number two. Part of the old sports field will be transformed into a second parking spot which also connected to the main entrance via a new road.

Secondly, the facilities of the school will also change greatly throughout the 20 years-period. As an example, at the site of the old sports field, there will be another school building with the capacity to withhold nearly 400 students. In addition, the path located in the middle of building 1 and 2 will be shortened and intersected with a new hallway that connects the two building together.

The maps given diagrams illustrate the differences between a school structure site in 2004 and the renovation planned for of that school in 2024.

Overall, we can clearly see that the in 2024, the school will be able to hold accommodate more students than it did in 2004. the previous version. The increase in capacity is mainly due to an additional school building and another car park on the north-east side of the site.

Firstly, the scenic outdoors area of the school will be changed drastically in 2024 with the size reduction of the sports field. Placed in the north end of the school in 2004, the sports field will be relocated in to the east side, parallel to the school's building number two. Part of the old sports field will be transformed into a second parking spot area which will also be connected to the main entrance via a new road.

Secondly, the facilities of the school will also change greatly throughout the 20 year-period. As an example, at the site of the old sports field, there will be another school building larger than the two existing ones. with the capacity to withhold nearly 400 students. In addition, the path located in the middle of between buildings 1 and 2 will be shortened and intersected with a new hallway that will connect those two buildings together.