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It is argued that oral communication is more effective than written ones. In my opinion, each type of communication is important depending on certain circumstances.

On the one hand, spoken words play a vital role in situations that demand body language and facial expression. Dating is an excellent example of this. For instance, emotion icons, photos, or videos can not replace a real smile and different feelings in a face to face date. Direct meetings will increase understanding between people which may help us guess the true feelings of them due to their actions and expressions. Therefore, when it comes to situations that need love and emotions, oral communication becomes much more powerful than written messages through the screen.

On the other hand, in terms of law and business, written words are especially essential which shows the professionalism of the authorities or organizations. For example, in court, words may count for nothing if there is no valid evidence such as written documents to support our arguments. In addition, in business, sending emails regarding promotions and sales to targeted customers are more convenient and faster than to meet and talk with each person. Furthermore, it represents a highly professional working style because not all customers want to have a meet with a salesperson.

In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that oral communication becomes more effective when we need to use our gestures and show our emotions to other people, particularly lovers, friends, or family members. While written one is preferable in court and business.

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It is argued that oral communication is more effective than written ones. In my opinion, each type of communication is important depending on certain circumstances. (The topic is which is more powerful, not important. You did not answer the essay prompt: To what extent do you agree or disagree? To answer correctly, use an adverb of extent. Do you know these adverbs? )

On the one hand, spoken words play a vital role in situations that demand body language and facial expression. Dating is an excellent example of this. For instance, emotion icons, photos, or videos can not replace a real smile and different feelings in a face to face date. Direct meetings will increase understanding between people which may help us guess their true feelings of them due to their actions and expressions. Therefore, when it comes to situations that need love and emotions, oral communication becomes much more powerful than written messages through the screen.

On the other hand, in terms of law and business, written words are especially essential which shows the professionalism of the authorities or organizations. For example, in court, words may count for nothing if there is no valid evidence such as written documents to support our arguments. In addition, in business, sending emails regarding promotions and sales to targeted customers are more convenient and faster than meeting and talking to meet and talk with each person. Furthermore, it represents a highly professional working style because not all customers want to have a meet with a salesperson.

In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that oral communication becomes more effective when we need to use our gestures and show our emotions to other people, particularly lovers, friends, or family members. While written forms are one is preferable in court and business.


Most of your essay was off-topic. You do not understand the word power. It is about the power of the spoken or written word to affect history and the actions of millions of people. For example, there are orators who, through their power of words, can start wars or negotiate peace. They are great leaders, and can influence poeple to revolt and fight for freedom. However, the written word is powerful because it can endure through a long history and influence people and their belief systems. The words in the Bible, Koran, or Rigveda are very powerful in that regard.

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