Hi, teachers!

I want to hear from you how these sentences read!

This is an explanation for the picture below, which is a part of an article covering drone delivery!

It is originally written in Korean and I translated it in English!

Do those sentences sound natural?

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[PICTURE]


A delivery drone of Wing, subsidiary of Alphabet Inc. It flies with 14 propellers. Wing started to cooperate with a pharmacy chain Walgreen Co. and conduct trial service of over-the-counter drugs and basic commodities in Virginia last year.


One more question!

If I write the last sentence like “Wing cooperates with a pharmacy chain Walgreen Co. and conducts trial service of over-the-counter drugs and basic commodities in Virginia, which started last year”, is it awkward? ♡♡


Thank you teachers for reading my post! >.<

The new delivery drone of Wing, a subsidiary of Alphabet Inc., has 14 propellers. Wing started a joint venture with Walgreens Co. to conduct a trial service of delivery of over-the-counter drugs and basic commodities in Virginia last year.