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Yaniv's own pocket- is that correct?
but now given that the amount of guests have been growing - is that correct grammatically/tense?

Shabbat at Yaniv's is funded from Yaniv's own pocket every Shabbat, and he demands nothing in exchange for his guests, but now given that the amount of guests have been growing from Shabbat to Shabbat, he calls on you to share with him ...

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Shabbat at Yaniv's is funded from Yaniv's own pocket every Shabbat, and he demands nothing in exchange from his guests, but now given that the number of guests has been growing from Shabbat to Shabbat, he is going to call on you to share with him ...

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Thanks for correcting me, I hope to improve