Nowadays, the deforestation is seriously effecting on the environment by human-being maneuvers. There are manifold solutions to sort this problem out.

First of all, stop using single-wooden use would reduce a big number of logging. People use the single-wooden use for manifold purposes such as bringing these when they go to picnic on account of its convenience and inexpensive. Then comes a water’s pollution, as it is released into the park’s pond. The solution for these wasting use are bringing the alternatives out such as using the straws made from steel, in lieu of wood, or taking plates using from home to go to picnic. Therefore, washing these after coming back home.

The second solution for preventing deforestation is to use high-tech devices to read book. For example, using Kindle, a reading-book device which is immensely prevalent in modern life, in lieu of using conventional books which can be found in every book stores. There is a huge amount of wood being fall per year for producing books. This process would cause air’s pollution. This is not effecting on human being’s health only, but also destroying manifold animal’s habitat. Using the high-tech reading book is making reading becomes more comfortable, and also saving a lot of natural resource.

In conclusion, it is can not be denied that there are a huge damaged effects that human have done to the environment, especially deforestation. People should make a massive efforst to solve this.

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Nowadays, the deforestation is seriously effecting (wrong word) on the environment by human-being (wrong word) maneuvers. (wrong word) There are manifold (wrong word) solutions to sort this problem out.


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First of all, stop (wrong form. Do not use a verb as a subject.) using single-wooden use (wrong expression. I have no idea what this means. ) would reduce a big number of logging. (wrong expression. Logging is non-count. It is wrong to use "number" with a non-count noun.) People use the single-wooden use for manifold purposes such as bringing these when they go to picnic on account of its convenience and inexpensive. (wrong word - inexpensive is an adjective. You cannot use it as a noun.) Then comes a water’s (wrong expression. Water is non-count. ) pollution, as it is released into the park’s pond. The solution for these wasting use (wrong word) are bringing the alternatives out such as using the straws (wrong word) made from steel, in lieu of wood, or taking plates using from home to go to picnic. Therefore, washing these after coming back home.

The second solution for preventing deforestation is to use high-tech devices to read book. (wrong form) For example, using Kindle, a reading-book device (wrong expression) which is immensely prevalent in modern life, in lieu of using conventional books which can be found in every book stores. (wrong form) There is a huge amount of wood being fall (wrong expression) per year for producing books. This process would cause air’s (wrong form) pollution. This is not effecting (wrong word) on human being’s (wrong word) health only, but also destroying manifold (wrong word) animal’s habitat. Using the high-tech reading book (wrong expression) is making reading becomes (ungrammatical) more comfortable, and also saving a lot of natural resource.

In conclusion, it is can not be denied that there are a huge damaged effects that human have done to the environment, especially deforestation. People should make a massive efforst to solve this.