It is thought remaining the teachers for many years is beneficial for students, while some believe it is better to have different teachers every year. Personally, I think changing teachers is the proper route for students' development.


The same schoolteachers for specific classes bring about a variety of drawbacks. Firstly, the similar method to expose to lessons might cause boredom and fatigue. For example, if monotonous one-way delivery of information is the teachers' style, students are only bombarded with knowledge and fail to absorb them. Secondly, the inconfidence of some may result from the same arrangement of teachers. There are lots of teachers with fixed assumptions about each student and only pay more attention to the high-flyers while the others are regarded as the lower-level group. With this unchanged situation for a long time, students are prone to suffer from stress and anxiety and lose the competitive spirit. In the long run, they have difficulty keeping up with the lectures.


In my opinion, educational institutions should let different educators take the responsibility at school. Obviously, the different styles from various teachers brings the feelings of joys and freshness to the atmosphere. Students have plenty of opportunities to learn from one-way to two-way communication or play-centred approach. Each style might be suitable for different students, therefore, there is nobody falling behind with studies for too long. Besides, this kind of arrangement contributes to enhance the sense of adaptability for both. For teachers, it is essential to tailor their teaching method to encounter various classes. For students, they are likely to develop their communication skills and the ability to get used to the new method, which are dispensable in the working environment later in life.

In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea of arranging various teachers since it has several perks.

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Topic: That it is good for students to have the same or different teachers for several years. Give your opinions You did not copy the instructions fully. Please give us the full topic you are writing about.

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It is thought remaining the teachers (Ungrammatical. It does not have the meaning you want: He remained a teacher for man years despite poor working conditions. = He did not change his profession.) for many years is beneficial for students, while some believe it is better to have different teachers every year. Personally, I think changing teachers is the proper route for students' development.


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There are two different strategies of assigning teachers to classes in elementary school systems. One is having the same teacher for a given group of students over several years. The other is for each teacher to be dedicated to one grade. For example, there is a third-grade teacher, and her students will be a new group of children each year. Personally, I think that the second strategy is more beneficial for the students.


The same schoolteachers for specific classes bring about a variety of drawbacks. (This does not have the meaning you want. It means that these teachers are not good at teaching.) Firstly, First, the similar method (This means one method. Which one are you writing about?) to expose to lessons (wrong expression) might cause boredom and fatigue. (Are the teachers bored?) For example, if monotonous one-way delivery of information is the teachers' style, students are only bombarded with knowledge and fail to absorb them. (wrong pronoun) Secondly, Second, the inconfidence (not a word) of some may result from the same arrangement of teachers. There are lots of teachers with fixed assumptions about each student and only pay more attention to the high-flyers (too casual for a formal essay) while the others are regarded as the lower-level group. With this unchanged situation for a long time, students are prone to suffer from stress and anxiety and lose the competitive spirit. In the long run, they have difficulty keeping up with the class. lectures. (Lecture applies to university-level courses.)

In my opinion, educational institutions should let different teachers educators take the responsibility at school. Obviously, the different styles from various teachers brings the feelings of joys and freshness to the atmosphere. Students have plenty of opportunities to learn from one-way to two-way communication or play-centred approach. Each style might be suitable for different students, therefore, there is nobody falling behind with studies for too long. Besides, this kind of arrangement contributes to enhance the sense of adaptability (I do not understand this.) for both. For teachers, it is essential to tailor their teaching method to encounter various classes. For students, they are likely to develop their communication skills and the ability to get used to (Wrong verb) the new method, which are dispensable in the working environment later in life.

In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea of arranging various teachers since it has several perks. (wrong word)

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Thank you so much for your review

Can you suggest me some words that

1. replace the word "high-flyers" to make it more formal ?

2. is the noun of the adj "unconfident"?

3. replace the wrong expression "to expose to lessons"?


This sentence "Besides, this kind of arrangement contributes to enhance the sense of adaptability" means that students may approach to different teaching styles and have to quickly adapt to that style. Therefre, can increase their adaptability. How I can express it in a way that is simple and easy to understand?

Thank you so much

Minh HoCan you suggest me some words that

1. replace the word "high-flyers"

There are lots of teachers with fixed assumptions about each student and only devote attention to the / most intelligent / highest performing / best / most attentive / hardest-working high-flyers while ignoring the others.


2. is the noun of the adj "unconfident"?

Second, the lack of self-confidence in some may result from the same arrangement of teachers.

Second, the insecurity in some may result from the same arrangement of teachers.

3. replace the wrong expression "to expose to lessons"?

First, repeating the same methods over and over to present the lessons might result in the students' being bored and fatigued.

Minh HoThis sentence "Besides, this kind of arrangement contributes to enhance the sense of adaptability" means that students may approach to different teaching styles and have to quickly adapt to that style. Therefre, can increase their adaptability. How I can express it in a way that is simple and easy to understand?

Each style might be suitable for different students; (semicolon) therefore, there is nobody falling behind in their studies for too long. Besides, this kind of arrangement, giving students an exposure to different learning styles, contributes to their increased ability to adapt to different situations. This is a soft skill which will benefit them as adults.