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The best magazine in China is the Bund.

In fact, one Bund is including 4 booklets, Culture, Life, Style, and the global information.
The Culture part is introducing the newest information about the culture. For example, the reviews of books and movies, but it is very different from the star magazines, because the emphasizes of these articles are the story of movie but not the stars. Sometimes this part also recommends some good CDs and dramas.

The Life part is just like guide book that tell you the details of some good hotels, pubs, and snack bars. I think the best page in this part is the design page. On this page, you can know the most popular design of house, car, PC, and cell phone very clearly.

The Style part is also a strong point in the whole magazine. It is very difficult to show the advantages of the style part, because the style magazines are too much to count, and no body like read the same things on two different magazines, but the Bund can catch the way different from others to show their own ideas.

Last part the global information is also the most important part and the biggest part of the whole magazine. It looks like a full color newspaper, from the big news about the new America president Obama, to the small news about some stars.

Most perfect magazines have some same characteristic, like including all kinds of information, cheap, and have its own idea.

The price of Bund is just 3 RMB, so cheap is another important reason that can make the Bund becoming a popular magazine.

The reason why the Bund had been popular for a long time in China is that except the above reasons the Bund still has other advantages.

The cover page of the Bund is more beautiful than others; all the booklets have its own cover page, and the titles of some big articles are type around the people on the cover page. The shine point of the cover page is that everything can on the cover page but not only the stars and models, the views and buildings are also OK.
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The best magazine in China is Bund. (Is the magazine called "Bund" or "The Bund"?)

The Bund comprises four parts: Culture, Life, Style, and Global information.

The Culture discusses about the latest information on culture. For example, it reviews books and movies, but, unlike celebrity magazines, the Culture emphasizes the stories and not the actors of the movies. The Culture also recommends good music and theatre.

The Life is just like a guide book that informs you about good hotels, pubs, and snack bars. I think the best page in Life is its design page. On this page, you can know very clearly the most popular design of houses, cars, PCs, and cell phones.

The Style is also a strong section in the whole magazine. ... (I don't understand the remaining part).

The last part, Global Information, is also an important section, and it is the biggest part of the whole magazine. It looks like a full color newspaper, and it covers the big news such as the new U.S. President Obama to the small news about celebrities.

Bund is a good magazine because it has a unique character and includes many different kinds of information.

The price of Bund is cheap: just 3 RMB, which makes Bund a rising popular magazine.

There is another reason why Bund has been popular for a long time in China.

The cover page of the Bund is more beautiful than others. Each of its four parts have its own cover page, designed so that the titles of the main articles are arranged around the people on the cover page. Another strong design is ... (I don't understand the remaining part too).

Chris
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(I have taken some liberties with your article after I met Bill, the editor of the Bund, in Shanghai. If you wish, you may take full credit for all these changes if you approve of them. Let me be your own, private, one-time, English-speaking editor, free of charge. I agree with your sentiments about the Bund!)
The best magazine in China is the Bund.
In fact, the Bund publishes in 4 separate parts: Culture, Life Style, Style, and Global information.
The Culture part introduces stunning, new information about Chinese and worldwide culture, often including reviews of books and movies, relating interesting intellectual, informational takes on a theme without the "cheese." Sometimes this part also recommends good CDs and dramas.
The Life part presents a photographic guide book that shares the details of outstandingly unique hotels, pubs, and snack bars. I think the best page in this part is the design page. On this page, you can discover cutting edge designs from houses to cars, PCs to cell phones, to infinity. The Bund is able to locate prototypes that will soon be on the market, giving it a futuristic touch.
The Style part is also a strong feature of the whole magazine. Since style magazines are abundant in China, the Bund stands above all others by finding distinctly unique and fascinatingly creative ways to portray new own ideas.
Lastly, the global information edition represents a highly significant, important part that is the most attractive feature to many people. Similar to a full color newspaper on best quality, glossy paper stock, the Bund can equally report world-shaking news about world leaders to the smallest, hilarious news about some previously-unknown, upcoming new talent in the world or just a quirky fact such as an especially strange-looking piece of Sushi.
Many well-known magazines exist for good reason, but the Bund exceeds all expectations.
The price of Bund is just 3 RMB, so its affordability is another important reason that makes the Bund a forerunner in becoming China's number one magazine.
However, this writer feels that the main reason why the Bund had been popular for such a long time in China is that beyond the previously mentioned features, the Bund still has other advantages.
The cover pages of the Bund are strikingly photographic genius; all the booklets each have their own cover pages, and highlighted articles immediately attract interest. Every reader will find something to interest him/her, providing a fount of information, a cultural eye opener, an interesting view into the life of some personality, a visual trip to a place one would live to go, an adventure, a fairytale story, life as one has never seen before.
That is the treasure of the Bund magazine.