The bar chart illustrates the total money invested in four categories namely Machinery, Building, Staff Training, and Research in five organizations.
Looking at the graph, it is obvious that all Organization has invested a lot of money in each category than others, whilst D and E allocate funds for these categories the least. Additionally, in terms of spending budgets, Organization C is the most distinct from others.
Organizations A and B invest over 1 billion euros in Building, Staff Training, and Research, whereas the amount of money invested in Machinery is just nearly 1 billion euros. the total money allocated to the Building is the highest and reaches a peak at 1,4 billion in Organization A, while the number of money invested in Staff Training in Organization B hit the highest point in the graph at roughly 2 billion euros.
In Organization C, the Machinery has the highest investment, ịn comparison with other Organizations, and this figure for Research is also higher than Organization D and E with around 1,2 and 1,4 billion, in the same level of Machinery. The Building investment is higher than Staff Training about 0,2 billion. Both Organizations D and E have a similar allocation in Building, peaking at 1 billion, while the money allocated to Research is the lowest than the others, approximately 6 and 6,5 billion euros respectively.
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[ 1] The bar chart illustrates the total money invested in four categories
namely(machinery, building, staff training, and research) in five organizations.Looking at the graph, it is obvious that all Organization has invested a lot of money in each category than others, whilstOverall, organizations A and B invested much more than D and E.allocate funds for these categories the least. Additionally, in terms of spending budgets, Organization C is the most distinct from others.[ 2] Organizations A and B invest over 1 billion euros in Building, Staff Training, and Research,
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[ 1]: You wrote 224 words. You do not have enough time in the exam for that. Moreover, it shows you can’t summarize. Aim for 160-180.
[ 2]: The rest of your summary is not well organized and some of it is not very clear. For example, the underlined sentence does not make it clear that each of A and B spent those amounts. Also, “over 1 billion” is not precise enough. Organize your ideas better and try again. Post below.