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The bar chart demonstrates that certain university subjects consist of sciences, mathematics, social sciences, languages, humanities, The Art (art, music, drama), literature, and law that were chosen by students (males and females; in thousands) in 2005.
As for male students, the most chosen subject is sciences with the number of just over 20000 and the least is languages and The Art with almost a half of 5000. As for female students, the most chosen one is social sciences with the number of near 25000 and the least is mathematics and law with the number of near 5000.
The difference between the number of the most and the least chosen subjects of males is near 15000 and for females is 20000.

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The bar chart demonstrates that certain university subjects consist of sciences, mathematics, social sciences, languages, humanities, The Art (art, music, drama), literature, and law that were chosen by students (males and females; in thousands) in 2005. (You never told the reader what is plotted.)
As for male students, the most chosen subject is sciences with the number of (Not a good phrase) just over 20000 and the least is languages and The Art with almost a half of 5000. (Half of 5000 is 2500. Just write the number.) As for female students, the most chosen one is social sciences with the number of near 25000 and the least is mathematics and law with the number of near 5000.
The difference between the number of the most and the least chosen subjects of males is near 15000 and for females is 20000.