The bar graph illustrates the proportion of 6 various age group Austrialian female and male who had regular workout in the year 2010.

As can be seen from the graph, it is clearly evident that women had the highest the numbers for people who engaged in physical ativities, exception to in term of teenagers group

In almost all groups, the percentage of women was higher than the figure for men. The only exception was for the age range between 15 and 24 year, 52,8% of males and 47,7% of females in this who participated in daily exercises.

The largest difference in data for people of the distinctive gender was recorded for the group from 35 to 44 years old, approximately for 13%. The opposite situation can be noticed in the seniors group ,only 0,4% female more than male go involeved in regular excercises, accounted for 46,7% and 47,1% in respectively.

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