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The three pie charts below present the average proportions of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed too much that may be unhealthy in the United States.

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Topic: : The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.( Average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA)

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