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Hi. I'm looking for a title for a script I've written. Would these be equally OK to you? Would the second sound too poetic to you? Thank you.

- The city's silent lights.

- The silent lights of the city.

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anonymousWould the second sound too poetic to you?

No.

CJ

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anonymousWould these be equally OK to you?

It's totally up to you, but I see nothing wrong with the English of either one. There is also "The Silent City Lights", right?