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When she was a kid, she couldn't buy things on her own. She relied on her parents. Now that she has a job, to which she is used to work just 8 hours a day, she can afford her own life. Interestingly, there are things she could do 10 years ago and now she can't, for instance, the climbing of trees, she could also sleep all day long, she could watch as many TV shows as she wanted. Nowadays, life is better for her, but no easier.

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I have underlined some problem areas:

When she was a kid, she couldn't buy things on her own. She relied on her parents. Now that she has a job, to which she is used to work just 8 hours a day, she can afford her own life. Interestingly, there are things she could do 10 years ago and now she can't, like climbing trees. She could also sleep all day long, she could watch as many TV shows as she wanted. Nowadays, life is better for her, but no easier.
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Thanks for point out the parts with problems.

When she was a kid, she couldn't buy things she wanted. She relied on her parents. Now that she has a job, in which she is used to work just 8 hours a day, she can afford her new life. Interestingly, there are things she could do 10 years ago and now she can't, like traveling abroad. She could also sleep all day long. She could watch as many TV shows as she wanted. Nowadays, life is better for her but no easier.

I need to study harder.

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When she was a kid, she couldn't buy things she wanted. She relied on her parents. Now that she has a job and works 8 hours a day, she can afford things herself. Interestingly, there are things she could do 10 years ago and now she can't, like traveling abroad. She could also sleep all day long and watch as many TV shows as she wanted. Nowadays, life is better for her but no easier.