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The line graph demonstrates the proportion of young British people who choose to eat a vegetarian diet from 1960 to 2020.

Overall, the picture shows two key domains of vegetarianism: one peaking around 1980 and the second in 2015 after approximately forty years.

In 1960, only a small percentage of adolescents ( about 1%) were vegetarian. There was a sharp increase within 20 years later to peak at around 15 % in 1980.
Thereafter, it dropped steeply over the next 10 years, followed by a slight fluctuation from nearly 7% in 1990 to 5% in 2000. During this period, the rate of young vegetarians reached the lowest point of just 4% in 1996. Since then, the number of young British people has gradually risen to peak at approximately 10% in 2015 and continuously remained the same between 9% in 2010 and 12 % in 2020.

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The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.


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The line graph demonstrates (wrong word) plots the proportion of young British people who chose choose to eat a vegetarian diet from 1960 to 2020.

Overall, the picture shows there are two key domains of time spans where vegetarianism was more popular: one peaking around 1980 and the second in 2015 after approximately forty years later.

In 1960, only a small percentage of none of these adolescents ( about 1%) were vegetarian. There was a sharp rise over the next increase within 20 years later to peak at around 15% in 1980. Thereafter, it dropped steeply over the next 10 years, followed by a slight fluctuation (See my advice. This is not fluctuation.) changes from nearly 7% in 1990 to 5% in 2000. During this period,The percentage rate (There are no rates on this graph.) of young these vegetarians reached the lowest point since 1965 of just 4% in 1996. Since then, the number of young British people it has gradually risen to peak at approximately 11% in 2011 and plateau with very small variations around 11% over the final nine years. continuously remained the same between 9% in 2010 and 12 % in 2020.