Hi, I'm Russian, so English is not my first language. I have written a big novel - it's a real story from my life that happened to me when I was 20 years old. Of course, originally it's written in Russian, but now I am translating some chapters into English. I'd like to put some of the translated chapters out here and maybe get some feedback.


The scene is laid in Arkhangelsk, Russia. A student of the local university Andrew Saltikov, a very ambitious young man, wants to set his own business and move to Moscow. One day he meets a girl online. She lives in Moscow, but she's a virgin with no friends and sounds very unhappy. All she dreams of is to move to some small town where nobody knows her and start a new life there...

You might be interested in:

Please I Need Your Feedback

The diagram illustrates the process of making compost from organic waste. There are five stages in the production of compost, beginning with an empty, aerated, plastic container...

Important Announcement From Our Team

Hey all, We started EnglishForward back in 2002, over 16 years ago, as an EFL community. In 2002 there was no Facebook, Google was still a 'startup' and there were only a handful...

What's One Of The Last Pictures You Took?

Hey guys! I believe that a lot of you like taking pictures. So I suggest that we post here our shots - it can be scenery, architecture, your town or country sights, objects...

World's Shortest Poem

Contrary to what is reported by many, the world's shortest poem is not Fleas (Adam Had 'em), though at one time it was the shortest. The world's shortest poem is by The Greatest...

Book Review-Canterville Ghost

Actually,when I first time look at the title of this book, I thought it must be a very scary ghost story.But when I read the story,it quite interesting because it is not scary...