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The maps illustrate how the town of Lakeside changed in the early years of the 21st century
Overall, this town underwent some significant transforms due to the redevelopment and the addition of infrastructures.
On the left-hand side of the river, the residential area and the arts centre nearby were destroyed and replaced by the shopping centre and the new multi-screen cinema respectively. In addition, a small car park was erected on the original site of the Derelict warehouses and the old town next to this warehouses was also knocked down to make room for triangular area of the offices and a new university. Meanwhile, the schools and the residential area in the northwest corner stayed unchanged.
In the opposite side, about half of the woodland area was cut down and residential area in the north of Lakeside was also demolished to make way for the huge extension of industrial complex. At the same period, the lake at the beginning of the river was also narrowed into the small pond.

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The maps illustrate how the town of Lakeside changed in the first decade early years of the 21st century (missing punctuation)
Overall, this town underwent some significant transforms (wrong word - transform is a verb.) transformation due to the redevelopment and the addition of infrastructures. (wrong form - infrastructure is non-count.)
On the left-hand west side (On maps, use the cardinal directions - north, south, east and west.) of the river, the residential area and the arts centre nearby were destroyed and replaced by a the shopping centre and the new multi-screen cinema respectively. In addition, a small car park was erected on the original site of the derelict warehouses and the old town next to this (wrong form) warehouses was also knocked down to make room for a triangular-shaped area of the for offices and a new university. Meanwhile, the schools and the residential area in the northwest corner stayed unchanged.
In On the opposite side (Of the river? On the east side of the river?) , about half of the woodland area was cut down and the residential area in the north (I don't see what you are referring to. The residential area on the northwest corner has not changed.) of Lakeside was also demolished to make way for an expansion the huge extension of the industrial complex, which increased in land area by about a factor of five..At the same period, The size of the lake at the beginning of the river was also decreased substantially. It is now narrowed into a the small pond.

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Topic: The maps below show the changes experienced by the residents in the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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