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Can you help make theses two sentences more natural? They are to describe the picture below.

The scene is so beautiful. Looking at the deers relaxing made me relaxed too.

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The plural of deer is deer, not deers.

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mezzopianoCan you help make theses two sentences more natural? They are to describe the picture below.The scene is so beautiful. Looking at the deers relaxing made me relaxed too.

"So" as a bare intensive sounds jejune. If you must use an adverb, use one with some meaning in it. The plural of "deer" is "deer". Maybe "The scene is blissfully beautiful. Looking at the deer relaxing made me relaxed too."

This is great advice.