the shown chart give information about the sales of five different types of jam in 5 year period.
in general,the line in strawberry,rasoberry and grape have a upward trend throughout the period.The strange in cherry and plum decrease in all time.In addition,all of number also have a erratic values from 2009 to 2014.
first of all in plum , the data is a unchanging trend, it go down from 2.5 to 0 in 5 five years(2009-2014).next in cherry, the finger have upward trend in 1 year from 2009 to 2010,from 2011 to 2012.It have a drop from 2010 to 2011 ,from 2013 to 2014.And it have unchanging trend in a year (2012-2013).
third of rasoberry, the number have not volatile data ,it increases from 2.5 to 5.5 in 5 years.In addition, data of strawberry have a steep data in a period(2009-2014).final in grape, it rises between 0.5 to 4.5 in 5 years(2009-2014)
In short,The given chart compares the number of sales in five different kinds of jams from 2009 to 2014

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