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Hi

Could you please help me make this description natural? I am not happy about the red parts.

Tina' small painting on the huge wall looked too insufficient. So he decided to make one more to give balance/support to the first.

Thanks,

Tom

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Mr. TomTina's
Mr. TomShe decided

I take it that's what you intended, right?

Mr. Tommake

Do you mean "paint" or "hang"?

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Thanks, Teecher.

I am sorry for the typos. Is the rest of the text natural English?

Tina's small painting on the huge wall looked too insufficient. So she decided to paint one more to give balance/support to the first.

Tom

I'm going to combine the thread title with it too.

Mr. TomTina's lone small painting on the huge wall looked quite/somewhat desolate, so too insufficient. she decided to paint one more to give it some balance. /support to the first.

Try that.