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The table illustrates the proportion of people aged 65 and over 3 various in countries Canada, Germany and the UK in 1998, 2000 and evaluation of 2030

Overall, there is an increase in the percentage of the senior inhabitants in all countries through the period of time examined, with the UK witnessing remained unchanged in the first 12 years. In addition, the proportion of the older population had consistently the highest in Germany, which remained at the top till 2030. While The UK experienced the smallest percentage of older citizens in all 3 years

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Hi there,

If you're practising for IELTS, then that is not enough. You need to write a minimum of 150 words. Can you show us the table?

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