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Hello,
I am not sure whether the two sentence makes sense in term of grammar and semantics.
Can you give me a hand with checking them
Thank you for your help.

1. Go sightseeing the united state makes it possible for me to brush up my English proficiency.

2. Museums and galleries is where they glean an awful of antiques, masterpieces and artistic works some of which introduce the evolution of America society, portray giant heroic figures, and depict what the real America is.

3. Traveling to America is a good means by which to cut into its culture.

4. Hardly are people aware of the fact the preparation of food can gain a great sense of achievement.
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2. Museums and galleries exhibit many antiques, masterpieces and artistic works, some of which introduce the evolution of American society, portray heroic figures, and depict the real America.

3. Traveling in America is a good way to experience its culture.

4. People are hardly aware of the fact that the preparation of food can involve a great sense of achievement.
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Dear kk,

1. Going sightseeing in the United States will make it possible for me to brush up my English.

Kind regards,
Goldmund
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