Helo everyone! I'm a new member and I glad to join this forum.
The first time I really like this forum and want to contribute something for this forum. So my English skill is not comfortable that order me to practise English anymore. This is the first time I depend on this forum for help. If you can help me to correct grammar faults in this essay, I will give you something in reward for this help.

This is my essay: SINGLE PARENT ADOPTION (YES/NO)
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Regard,
Phuthuy-zin
Hello Phuthuy-zin,

Welcome to the forurms.

Generally, people post their essays here in the forums, and don't make people go to another site to read them. We also do not respond with corrections using an e-mail address - we make our comments right here in the forums.

You may want to paste your essay here instead of asking us to go your blog.
Thank for your reminder. My essay so long that why I want to get a link at here. Also, this is a first time so I did something in wrong way. Next time I won't make some mistakes like that. ^_^
This is my essay, and please help me to correct it if you can. So I'm grateful if you can help me.

Single Parent Adoption
Part 1
The trends of married couples today in taking care of their children are hiring a wet nurse or single parent adoption. In model life, married couples are following physical life and living in the less sentiment life. Therefore, many couples are breaking to pieces and their children will be under the influence of this failure. Many researches have shown that taking care of children constantly by mum and dad from birth is increasing opportunity for children to develop all of their potentialities and ensure their health for growing up.
Mum and dad are together taking care of their children constantly help to develop all of their potentiality. For example, a child is growing in a happy family will become a self-confident and powerful child. Living in happy parents creates assistance for the child to do anything. In addition, when the child is a failure or obstructed by obstacle, he will know how to accept the situations or self-controlled to find out the solution for problems if he is educated by his parents.
Ensuring children’s health for growing up is concerned by their nutrition. For example, when a baby at the breast is received the mother’s milk, he will be inherited antibodies from his parents which protest against diseases. In addition, a diet system for a child after two years old is also important. Powdered milk or soy-bean milk is providing protein, sugar and vitamin for the child. Potato soup or baby foods is also providing nitrogen, fiber and water for the child. Therefore, a good care of nutrition is provided for children by parents are very important that help children’s growing up.
In summary, to ensure that children are growing up with good health and develop all of their potentialities, they must be took care by their parents. Child who will become success in future life is often living in a happy family has enough mum and dad. In model life, married couple relationships should be holds fast by society to guarantee a good parents adoption.

Part 2
Everybody in the model life is looking after a woman has a baby without husband or a man has a baby without wife easier than in the past. A single parent adoption today often causes of many problems in social life. When a child is cared by a single parent, he has not enough affection of parents or nutrition for growing up. Therefore, he won’t have a firm psychology and will being a disadvantage in social.
Many single parent adoptions often do not have enough time to play game with their children and interested in their children lifestyle. Therefore, the children are developing with no affection of parents. Besides, the children do not have ensuring about nutrition because single parent often do not have enough information about children’s regimen. Thus, the children are not growing up with enough height and intelligent.
The children who live with single parent often have some psychology diseases because they have to live under pressure of no mum or no dad feeling. A single parent often does not explain correct reasons for children about there are no dad or no mum. Also, a child no dad or no mum is being in prejudice of people and has fewer interests. In addition, there are many difficult things to balance between children and the single parent demands because the children don’t want to share sentiment with a new person who is become a new dad or new mum of them.
To sum of, children need to have enough parents for taking care of them because a perfect family is a certain basis for children to develop good personalities. A family with enough parents forms good children and creates many good manners for society. Also, a sound family is an important element for building a good society.

Regard,
Phuthuy-zin
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There are some very serious flaws with organization, facts, clarity of though, and grammar. I can see no relationship between adoption and the rest of what you talk about.

Single Parent Adoption How does this relate to single-parent adoption?
Part 1
You don't have an introduction statement. What is this about?

The trends of married couples today in taking care of their children are hiring a wet nurse or single-parent adoption. Is it seriously a trend where you live to hire a "wet nurse"? You realize that it means hiring another woman to breast feed the baby? I don't understand what single-parent adoption has to do with the trends of married couples.

In model life, married couples are following physical life and living in the less sentiment life. I'm very sorry, but this makes absolutely no sense at all. What do you mean?

Therefore, many couples are breaking to pieces -- do you mean "divorcing"? -- and their children will be under the influence of this failure.

Many researches have shown that taking care of children constantly by mum and dad from birth is increasing opportunity for children to develop all of their potentialities and ensure their health for growing up. Research has shown that having both parents involved in the child's care correlates to children who develop to their full potential and have the best health. [Really? You need to be able to cite these studies.]

Mum and dad are together taking care of their children constantly help to develop all of their potentiality. Both parents taking care of the child together will help children reach their full potential.

For example, a child is growing in a happy family will become a self-confident and powerful child. This is not a "for example." It's "That is to say," -- You seem to assume that every household with both parents is a happy household. It also seems to assume that if the parents don't live together they are not happy. And lastly, the entire statement is simply not true - a lot of children from "happy homes" have problems. You can say it's "more likely" but you can't say "will"

Living in with happy parents creates assistance provides support for the child to do anything.

In addition, when the child is a failure I would say "fails at a task" - if you say "is a failure" it says the entire life is a mess or obstructed by obstacles, he will know how to accept the situations or self-controlled have better self control? to find out the solution for problems if he is educated by his parents. "Parents can teach their children how to find solutions to problems when they are unsuccessful at completing a task or are confronted by obstacles." But what does this have to do with wether the parents are together or not? It's nonsense to say that only if the parents are together can they do this.

Ensuring children’s health for growing up is concerned by their nutrition. What? Proper nutrition helps ensure a growing child's good health, perhaps?

For example, when a baby at the breast is received the mother’s milk, he breast-fed babies will be inherited aborb antibodies from his parents their mothers which protect against diseases. In addition, a proper diet system for a child after the age of two years old is also important. Powdered milk or soy-bean milk provides is providing protein, sugar and vitamins for the child. Potato soup What an odd example! or baby foods is also providing also provides nitrogen, fiber and water water?? for the child. Therefore, a good care of nutrition is provided for children by parents are very important that help children’s growing up.This is completely redudant.

Your summary does not talk about what you actually talked about - you spent an entire paragraph on nutrition, but you don't mention it here.I have no idea what it has to do with adoption.
In summary, to ensure that children are growing up with good health and develop all of their potentialities, they must be took care by their parents. Child who will become success in future life is often living in a happy family has enough mum and dad. In model life, married couple relationships should be holds fast by society to guarantee a good parents adoption.
The first time, I'm very thankful and look at your correction as a first help. Because I attended many forum, but none of them replied for my essay. For this help, I will look at your forum as a good place for everyone who wants to discuss or improve English skill. So I will present your forum address for many people as I can.

Regard,

phuthuy-zin
That's what we're here for - I hope the comments I made will help you.
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I already follow your comments to correct my essay. It so interesting that you can help me. I will look at the way you correct as a mode for me to develop my essay. One more time, I'm very thankful for your help.

Regard,

Phuthuy-zin
This is a paragraph that I want to check for grammar mistake. I hope that you can help me for this entreating help. So please accommondating for helping me.

A single parent adoption is so popular in social today. Many people are successful and having spare money for living. So they want to have a baby but they don’t want to be covered by relationship in a family. Therefore, they think that they just have a baby without get marriage and then they take cared their child with only dad or mum. But a single parent adoption has a lot of disadvantages against both parents adoption. Hereafter, I will present disadvantages of single parent adoption and advantages of both parents adoption.

Regard,

Phuthuy-zin