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I ducked while I was getting on the train because the doorway was not so tall. Then I turned right side and there was two side and then also I turned right side and there was 3 persons sitting in a seat and I know four person can sit on one seat if we adjust. So I asked the person to move a bit so that I can sit.

Please correct my sentences.
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I ducked while I was getting on the train because the doorway was not very high. Then I turned to the right and there were three passengers sitting on one seat. I know that four people can sit on one seat if we adjust, so I asked one person to move a bit so that I could sit.
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Thank you Mister Micawber.

But I turned twice to the right. First there were two sides, I turned right side and then there were two side and I turned to the right and there were three passengers sitting on one seat. Please look at the following diagram to understand what I want to say.

*************<<< <<****************************

I entered and turned right ____

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| | [I'm turning right again]

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*************<<<(doorway) ******************************

__________________________(Platform)______________________
Sorry-- neither the sentence nor the diagram help me. I suggest that you try not to be overly explicit-- simply say that you entered the car and saw an empty seat. No reader is going to be interested in precisely how you peregrinated.