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Dear friends

I have been asked to check the title of a friend's diploma thesis. The essay is in Czech and translating titles is always tricky. If you know the topic, any I would welcome any input on vocabulary. However, I am primarily concerned with word order. Here are the suggestions:

1. Optimisation* of Security Algorithms for Smartcards
2. Smartcard Security Algorithms Optimisation
3. Optimisation of Smartcard Security Algorithms

* Am I correct this is the preferred one over Optimization/Optimalization/Optimalisation?

Thank you in advance

BobEdel
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Hi,
I have been asked to check the title of a friend's diploma thesis. The essay is in Czech and translating titles is always tricky. If you know the topic, any I would welcome any input on vocabulary. However, I am primarily concerned with word order. Here are the suggestions:

1. Optimisation* of Security Algorithms for Smartcards
2. Smartcard Security Algorithms Optimisation
3. Optimisation of Smartcard Security Algorithms

I find #1 much clearer in meaning.
The others pile up too many nouns as adjectives.

* Am I correct this is the preferred one over Optimization/Optimalization/Optimalisation?
My dictionary offers only 'optimization'.

Clive
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Thanks, Clive.

BobEdel