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The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


The diagram illustrates how clothes are produced from plastic bottles.

In general, there are 10 main steps in the procedure, commencing with collecting used plastic bottles and ending with finished clothing.

At the beginning of the process, plastic bottles are gathered and delivered by truck to the manufacturing factories. Next, they are classified into different types and cut into pieces in a special funnel-shaped shredding machine. The following stage is that these pieces are put into the washing machine before being left in the sun to dry for at least 10 hours.

The subsequent stage begins in the cylinder machine with boiling the resulting pieces which precede strain. After being strained, the byproduct becomes yarn which is ready to be weaved in fabric. Lastly, the finishing rolls of cloth with a variety of colors are used to sew items of clothing.

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The diagram illustrates how clothes are produced from plastic bottles.

In general, there are ten main steps in the procedure, commencing with collecting used plastic bottles and ending with finished clothing. (That is not a very good "main features" paragraph. You need to look at the "big picture" and make combinations.. There should be two or three of these "main features")

You only need one paragraph for the "details." There is only one paragraph topic.

At the beginning of the process, plastic bottles are gathered and delivered by truck to the manufacturing factories. Next, they are classified into different types and cut into pieces in a special funnel-shaped shredding machine. The following stage (How does the "stage" relate to the "ten steps"? The reader is confused.) is that these pieces are put into the through a washing process machine before being left in the sun to dry for at least 10 ten hours. (Do not start a new paragraph.)

The subsequent stage (How does the "stage" relate to the "ten steps"? The reader is confused.) begins in the cylinder machine (Not a good phrase) with boiling the resulting pieces which precede strain. (Poor English. A strain is a muscle injury. ) After being strained, the byproduct (wrong word. A byproduct is something that is produces, but not used for the end product. It may be used for other purposes.) becomes yarn which is ready to be weaved in fabric. Lastly, the finishing rolls (Not a good phrase) of cloth with a variety of colors are used to sew (Not a good word) items of clothing.


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The flow chart illustrates the process in which plastics are recycled to make clothing.

Overall, there are three main stages; collecting the used plastic containers, converting them into yarn, and manufacturing the fabric and clothing. The second stage is the most detailed, with six steps.

In the first stage, used plastic bottles of different sizes are collected by trucks, conveyed to a manufacturing plant and sorted by type. What follows is the second stage, beginning with taking the bottles and chopping them into small fragments. In steps 2-3, the chips are thoroughly washed and dried for ten hours. In steps 4-6, they are put into a boiler, which produces a molten plastic that is pressed through a strainer, forming thin streams. When cooled, they become long strands of yarn which are wound onto spools. At some point in the process, colorant is added to the plastic, to make yarn of different shades. The third and final stage begins with weaving the yarn on a large mechanical loom, producing fabric, which is rolled up onto bolts. The cloth can then be used to make garments.

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The first brainstorming step to write an essay on process flows is to group the entire process into separate, simpler stages.

The groupings are best imagined by identifying the intermediate products. In this diagram there are three main stages and three products, two of which are intermediate.

collect and transport => output is sorted plastic material

process the raw material => output is colored yarn

make final product => output is clothing

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