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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of reparation.

Is it a common belief that one day processed food will become more prevalent, and even completely replace traditional cuisine. However, I firmly believe that it is easily static to consume convenience foods instead of traditional food products.

To begin with, cultural cuisine have been exsisting for thousands of years. In Neolithic Age, the primitive man discovered fire and continued into In the Iron Age, wise men created iron utensils and equipment to serve their hunting. After then, they learned how to heat food improving taste as well as health. Since then, the advent of cuisine diversity came up. Let take Vietnam as an example, some dishes become indispensable in the cultural tradition of worship in Vietnam such as Chung cake, caramelized pork and eggs etc.

On top of that, convenience foods are not good for our health if we eat them for a long time. Most of these foods added additive in order to stimulate people's taste without providing any nutrition. It is proven that some suffer from various health issues like obesity, heart disease, ... Not only that, these are sold at a surprisedly high price. Nevertheless, it is undeniable that a few companies are trying to manufacture convenience foods to a higher standard. But nothing could replace home-cooked foods. Traditional food is the antidote to increasingly insular and sedentary lifestyles. It is much healthier and better to enjoy my cooked foods.

To sum up, traditional foods defeated convenience food in many aspects, especially in quality and experience. Last but not least, making healthier food choices is always the first priority .

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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of reparation.

Is it a common belief that one day processed food will become more prevalent, and even completely replace traditional cuisine. However, I firmly believe that it is easily static to consume convenience foods instead of traditional food products.

To begin with, cultural cuisine have been exsisting for thousands of years. In Neolithic Age, the primitive man discovered fire and continued into In the Iron Age, wise men created iron utensils and equipment to serve their hunting. After then, they learned how to heat food improving taste as well as health. Since then, the advent of cuisine diversity came up. Let take Vietnam as an example, some dishes become indispensable in the cultural tradition of worship in Vietnam such as Chung cake, caramelized pork and eggs etc.

On top of that, convenience foods are not good for our health if we eat them for a long time. Most of these foods added additive in order to stimulate people's taste without providing any nutrition. It is proven that some suffer from various health issues like obesity, heart disease, ... Not only that, these are sold at a surprisedly high price. Nevertheless, it is undeniable that a few companies are trying to manufacture convenience foods to a higher standard. But nothing could replace home-cooked foods. Traditional food is the antidote to increasingly insular and sedentary lifestyles. It is much healthier and better to enjoy my cooked foods.

To sum up, traditional foods defeated convenience food in many aspects, especially in quality and experience. Last but not least, making healthier food choices is always the first priority .

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