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I met my best friend when we were students at secondary school. His name is Viet. My first impression of him is a boy who does well in school. His class is next to my class. However, I am not closer to him until we attended the running race wheels which was a part of a sports competition. I teamed up with him to finish this contest. We are quite similar such as favorite, way of speaking, taste. After the competition, we usually exchanged experiences about the study, stories around us. From that point, we become best friends.

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I met my best friend when we were students at secondary school. His name is Viet. My first impression of him was a boy who does well in school. His class was next to my class. However, I am not closer to did not know much about him until we attended the running race wheels which was a part of a sports competition. I teamed up with him to finish this contest. We are quite similar in many ways such as favorite singers, way of speaking, and love of phở taste. After the competition, we usually exchanged experiences about our studies and family the study, stories around us. From that point, we became best friends.

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