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Training report

Topic: 2 day Legal Awareness training on violence against Women and refer Violence against Women Cases

Venue: SEDAR House

Date: 20 -21 June 2018

Presenter: Gulalai,


The events was started by Saeeda Serat she well camed to the participants and has speech about introduction about care international activities and new project and well introduction with 10 executive members which invited in the work shop they were selected from KWA members for working in practical Work and support KWA members, also she introduced Gulalai to participants as new,

The training under the title of legal awareness about violence against women has been started by Gulalai, she starting the training with the comprehensive presentation about violence against women;

The mine focusing area of the first day presentation was about the following points:

  • Introduction of Violence against Women.
  • Introducing women with some special and kay legal words may they face during the refer system of case
  • Main objectives of EVAW law
  • Main right of violated woman
  • Which kind of support must Government of Afghanistan must provide to a violated women
  • The main root of knowing of violence against women as crime
  • Introduction with VAW case based on Afghanistan government Violence against Women spatial Law
  • Refer proses of VAW case and intruding the governmental affairs body in refer VAW cases
  • Effect of violence in women life

Before the starting of the second day of training we have a pretest to understand about the knowledge of the participants about the issues,

We find that just 2% of participants fully understand about the family case that 30 % almost understand and after the training we estimated that most of the participants understand about the issues,



The second day topic was about the following points;

  • Wedding forms as right , false and wrong which has direct affect in to mareged person future responsibility to each other and Heritage ,
  • Kind of divorcing and effected results
  • Situation of order of divorcing
  • Divorcing by the women based on Afghanistan family law
  • Condition of devoicing based on absence of husband
  • Any Case of Directly termination of family relationship and its effect on life
  • Condition of Alimony and refer alimony case

Participants with the interest participants in the desiccation and Question and answer port


Participant’s recommendation:

  1. Organization of same training directed by the this office representatives
  2. Facilitation of same training for action Groups members to enable them directly understand the issues
  3. Invite representatives from district governor office, and each district officer to can support women
  4. In some cases member of association face with threat by the violated women family members and they need the support from the likeminded man groups as well as,
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I don't understand the first paragraphs because the English is so poor. I will try to make it better, but I am guessing what you tried to say.



The events (Is it more than one event? I think you mean "training session" or "workshop") workshop was opened by Saeeda Serat. (End of sentence???) she well camed (??) to the participants and has speech about introduction about care international activities and new project and well introduction (I cannot comprehend this.) She gave an overview of the sessions and introduced the with 10 executive members which invited to the workshop. (End of sentence???) They were selected from KWA members for working involved in field work who represented all the in practical Work and support KWA members. , (End of sentence???) She introduced Gulalai to participants as a new member and first speaker.

The first session, titled " training under the title of legal "Awareness of the Laws concerning about Violence against Women", has been started was given by Gulalai, (End of sentence???) she starting the training with the It was a comprehensive presentation about violence against women.

The mine focusing area of the first day presentation was about the following points: During the first day of the workshop, the XX (xx = the number of different presentations) presentations from the speakers covered the following points:

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Organization of care Afghanistan has launched a new project by the name of legal awareness Program, based on this project the program team conducted a workshop 2 day Legal Awareness workshop on violence against Women and refer Violence against Women Cases to the legal referral system.

The workshop was opened by xxxxxx. (End of sentence???)(I do not know what information must be written after that, could you please guide me to complete this part?) she welcomed (it means that she Sayed welcome to the participants { it is wrong ? if yes ,how can I write it better??? ) to the participants and has speech about introduction about care international activities and new project and well introduction (I cannot comprehend this.) She gave an overview of the sessions and introduced the 10 executive members invited to the workshop. (End of sentence???) They were selected from KWA members involved in field work who represented all the KWA members. , (End of sentence???) also She introduced Gulalai to participants as a new member and first speaker.

The first session, titled” Awareness of the Laws concerning Violence against Women", was given by xxxxxxx, (End of sentence???) It was a comprehensive presentation about violence against women.

During the first day of the workshop, the XX (xx = the number of different presentations {presentation was not different but topic divided in to several parts) presentations from the speakers covered the following points:

  • Introduction of Violence against Women.
  • Introducing women with some special and kay legal words may they face during the refer system of case
  • Main objectives of EVAW law
  • Main right of violated woman
  • Which kind of support must Government of Afghanistan must provide to a violated women
  • The main root of knowing of violence against women as crime
  • Introduction with VAW case based on Afghanistan government Violence against Women spatial Law
  • Refer proses of VAW case and intruding the governmental affairs body in refer VAW cases
  • Effect of violence in women life

Note: thank you for your help, please review it again I am sure that my report arrangement are wrong ,I request for help in this regards as well,

Best Regards,

The workshop was opened by Saeeda Serat.

She welcomed the participants and gave an overview of the project and its objectives. The attendees were selected from KWA members involved in field work. She introduced Gulalai to participants as a new member and first speaker.

During the first day of the workshop, the following topics were discussed.

  • Introduction to Violence against Women.
  • Introducing women with some special and key legal words may they face during the refer system of case (I do not understand? Maybe "legal terminology related to violence against women."
  • Main objectives of EVAW law
  • The rights of abused women
  • Which kind of support must the government of Afghanistan provide to abused women?
  • The main causes of criminal abuse of women
  • Case studies : Introduction with VAW case based on Afghanistan government Violence against Women spatial Law
  • Refer proses of VAW case and intruding the governmental affairs body in refer VAW cases (I don't understand this at all. Maybe "Process of filing a case, what government agencies are involved, and what to expect)
  • Effect of violence on a woman's life


Best Regards,

Thank you very much ,I write again this report and bring all the changes as per your comments , please have a look and let me known is there are any other concerns,


Best Regards,

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