The given diagram illustrates how organic waste is recycled to create garden fertiliser.


Overall, there are five stages in the diagram, starting with preparing a plastic container and ending with the fertiliser is ready to be used in gardens.

To begin with, the recycling process of organic waste takes place in a plastic container which has a volume of two cubic meters. The container also has some gaps in two opposite sides of the container to make way for air.

Next, some sorts of waste including waste food, grass and newspaper are placed into the container respectively from bottom to top to form three layers, each layer of them is 15 centimeters thick. Subsequently, nitrogen and hot water are poured into the container with and then mixed with three layers of waste. Once the mixing process has been completed, the plastic container is burned in a high temperature to release heat vapours. After six months, organic waste in the container ultimately turns into fertiliser for gardening.



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The given diagram illustrates how organic waste is recycled to create garden fertiliser.


Overall, there are five stages in the process diagram, starting with preparing a plastic container and ending with the fertiliser is ready to be used in gardens. (ungrammatical clause structure. You cannot use a main clause as the object of a preposition.)

To begin with, the recycling process of organic waste takes place in a plastic container which has a volume of two cubic meters. The container also has some holes / vents gaps in two opposite sides of the container to make way for allow air to circulate.

Next, some sorts (wrong form) of waste including waste food, grass and newspaper are placed into the container respectively from bottom to top to form three layers, each layer being of them is 15 centimeters thick. Subsequently, nitrogen and hot water are poured into the container with and then mixed with the three layers of waste. Once the mixing process has been completed, the plastic container is burned (wrong word) in a high temperature to release heat vapours. (That is not correct. There is no fire. The natural composting process releases heat. Bacteria use the material for food and that generates heat. ) After six months, the organic waste in the container has become ultimately turns into fertiliser for gardening.

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instead of using “sort”, what is the alternative word?

kinds / variety

Next, some kinds of waste including food, grass and newspaper ...
Next, a variety of waste material including food, grass and newspaper ...

Next, various sorts of organic waste material including food, grass and newspaper ...

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