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Hollywood stars came out to save tigers.

Hollywood big star Harrison Ford and another female star who I don't know and can't recall her name stepped forward and called for an immediate plan to save the endangered species. According to the paper, Harrison Ford is a long time animal rights activist. Did you know that? He gave a speech about endangered animals and how global demand for wild animals is causing populations of wild animals to shrink. Today, it's estimated that there are less than 1000 tigers left in the world and is expected that they will become extinct in this generation. I was shocked when I heard the numbers. Though I know they are endangered species, I never knew they were that endangered. Maybe media and animal activists distorted the numbers. I mean, I always hear people attacked by tigers. Anyway, I'm on Harrison's side. We should help the cats. In fact, I want to get one as a pet if allowed. Emotion: smile

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Hollywood big star Harrison Ford and another female star who I don't know and whose name I can't recall can't recall her name stepped forward and called for an immediate plan to save the endangered species. According to the paper, Harrison Ford is a long time animal rights activist. Did you know that? He gave a speech about endangered animals and how global demand for wild animals is causing populations of wild animals to shrink. Today, it's estimated that there are less than 1000 tigers left in the world and it's is expected that they will become extinct in this generation. I was shocked when I heard the numbers. Though I know they are an endangered species, I never knew they were that endangered. Maybe media and animal activists distorted the numbers. I mean, I always hear about people being attacked by tigers. Anyway, I'm on Harrison's side. We should help the cats. In fact, I want to get one as a pet if it's allowed.
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Thanks, RayH.

Out of curiosity, how does "hear people attacked by tigers" sound to you?
New2grammarThanks, RayH.

Out of curiosity, how does "hear people attacked by tigers" sound to you?
OK, I understood what you meant when I first read the sentence but, strictly speaking, the way it's phrased it sounds like you were present at the attack and listened to the whole thing. I rewrote it for clarity and because the original is carelessly worded.
I see. Thanks, RayH. Your version is much better.
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