Clive, could you please check this composition? Is it OK as English?

・When we reach a certain age, we cannot help saying bad things about young people, even though we know we shouldn't do it. That is a problem of human nature. It is well-known that an ancient Egyptian criticized the young in the same way in a document. It seems that old people (tend to) feel irritated by the way the young do things until they die.

Thanks in advance.

(Edited by GG to fix original typos since identified by the original poster)
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Hi Taka,

I don't really have anything to add to the earlier comments.Emotion: smile

Taka, it's a sad thing when our fingers choose which letters to actually hit on the keyboard, isn't it?
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