Hi,This is Jackson from shenzhen city China.

I am now here to look for help to correct my draft or beg you to give me your version of that. your kindness will be respected and sincerely appreciated:

设备描述

Cinema 2500模块测试机采用PC+PLC控制方式伺服电机带动芯片条带和保护膜同步运动多个读写头。通过读写器与电脑的串口相连可同时完成COS灌装、卡片预个人化、芯片测试等工作。测试前可自动剥离原包装保护膜,测试后收卷又自动加装保护膜。安全性好,自动化程度高且节约成本。



Cinema 2500模块测试设备可一次测试八个芯片,坏片自动打印标记。只测试芯片好坏时,速度可达到4200张/小时;如COS灌装和预个人化的时间为20秒,整机的速度是1440片/小时。



Cinema 2500模块测试设备可在制成卡片前一次完成COS灌装、预个人化和模块检测工作,运作成本低,生产效率高。



技术参数(8个芯片站)

机械尺寸(LXWXH):1660X400X1632mm

机械重量:150KG

电源:单相AC,220V50/60H

功率:0.5KW

动作速度:平均10秒一站

产 量:约2400枚/小时

My English version:

Equipment description:
Cinema 2500 chip testing machine adapts PC and PLC to operate Motor to individually move belt of chip and protected PVC.This machine is with several chip reader. with connecting reader and ports of PC, it can do the following jobs simultaneously:COS footprint,perso of card,chip testing and so on.the chips and protected PVC belt can be divided automatically then after tested,the chips and protected PVC belt will be scrolled together,with high safety, automatically,finance,effectively.
Cinema 2500 equipment can test 8 chips simultaneously, bad ones will be marked automatically.the average speed should be 4200 pcs per hour,when testing requested only. footprint of COS and card pre-perso will take about 20 seconds per card.and the speed of whole machine will be 1440 pcs/hour.


Cinema 2500module testing equipment can finish footprint of COS ,pre-perso and chip testing before a card being completely finished.

Parameter( with 8 chip stations)
dimension: 1600*400*1632MM(Length,width,Height)
Gross weight:150KG
Power supply :Ac,220V ,50/60HZ
Power:0.5KW
speed:10 seconds per station averagely
产量:ahout 2400 ?per hour


Give me your hand ,Thanks.
I wish I knew Chinese language. I hope someone from this forum might help you soon.
Hi, I sell graphical art, especially hand written invitations. Please excuse me if my English and Chinese are poor

Sales pitch:

So, the Cinema 2500 sorts chips into 3 categories:

Dead

Useful

Kosher

telephone for power saving deals

[may I make my personal comment. Perhaps I can pretend that I prepare a 1 page brochure to sell this equipment to a client]

Equipment description:

Cinema 2500 chip testing machine

The chip which solves algorithms simultaneously, slots neatly into a cube shaped testing station.

So what is the real advantage?

A partially useful chip can be good for sewing machines or even legacy digital machines. Pop up technology means that recycling is easy.

The real advantage is that pop out diagnostics make it easy to save chips that function fully at 65% efficiency

Attractive features:

A bright green display eases eyestrain

Simple and reliable sorting,

manual override

chips that pass diagnostics are sealed directly from testing to in store delivery 100% money back guarantee

Synopsis

The Cinema 2500 is useful for:

dedicated hardware. For instance, CAD and computer aided machining.

Main advantage:

small footprint

fpower efficient

plug and play

Are you interested?

Telephone Albin on []

Remember: Small Footprint? The dimensions are very competitive

a perfect cube, 1632MM width,)

weighs150 KG

power supply Ac,220V

[I could maybe place text and graphical elements on one A4 sized page for easy printing

glossy pictures

production line pictures

scientific analysis (clip art)

bye

Albin
Teachers: We supply a list of EFL job vacancies
Albin,seems that you are quite familiar with this machine , so can you tell me somethings more about it ?
I edited the draft yesterday , and post it here . hope to give some advices on how to improve it !with many thanks.

Equipment description:

Cinema 2500 chip testing machine adapts PC and PLC to operate Motor to individually

move belt of chip and protected PVC belt. This machine is with several chip readers, with

connecting with ports of PC,

It can synchronization complete the jobs such as COS footprint, perso of card, chip testing and so on. It can automatism peel off the original packed protective film before testing, wrap and automatism adding protective film after testing. It’s good safety, high automatism and save cost. Cinema 2500 equipment can test 8 chips at once time, bad ones will be marked automatically.The speed can get 4200 pcs per hour, when chips testing requested only. Footprint of COS and card pre-perso will take about 20 seconds per card. and the speed of whole machine will be 1440 pcs/hour. Cinema 2500module testing equipment can finish footprint of COS , pre-perso and chip testing before a card being completely finished.

Technical Parameter(8 chip stations)

Dimension: 1600*400*1632mm(Length, width, Height)

Gross weight:150KG

Power supply :Ac,220V ,50/60HZ

Power:0.5KW

Action speed:10 seconds per station averagely

Output:about 2400 pcs per hour

Attractive features:

A bright green display eases eyestrain

Simple and reliable sorting.