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A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In you letter

-Thank him/her for inviting you

-Describe how you felt about his/her family members

-Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

Dear Lisa

Thank you for your invatation to the meal at your house yesterday.

I am very delighted to join in the meeting. It would be a great memory with me. Your family were so welcoming that i could make myself at home. I was impressed by the appetizing cuisine. Your mother cooked all the food, right ?

As for your father, he has a humorous and kindly character which made the everyone interested. I had a small talk with your sister to tell her about my hobbies and feel so comfortable during the conversation. The encounter was very great at all.

I would be appreciate it if your family can come to my house ro have a meal with me and my family. I am sure you will have the interesting like me.

I looking forward to hearing from you.

Your sincerely

Larisa

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Dear Lisa,

Thank you for your invitation to the meal at your house yesterday.

I am(1) very delighted to join in the meeting(2). It would be(3) a great memory with me(4). Your family were so welcoming that i could make myself I felt really at home. I was impressed by the appetizing delicious cuisine. Your mother cooked all the food, right?

As for your father, he has a humorous and kindly kind character which made the everyone happy. interested. I had a small talk with your sister to tell her about my hobbies and feel(5) so comfortable during the conversation. The encounter whole experience was very great enjoyable indeed. at all.

I would be appreciate it thrilled/honoured if your family can come to my house to have a meal with me and my family. I am sure you will like it. have the interesting like me.

I looking forward to hearing from you.(6)

Write back and let me know.

Your sincerely(6)

Cheers!

Larisa

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1- Wrong tense.

2- That’s unnatural.

3- In that sentence, “would be” indicates the future.

4- That doesn’t work.

5- Wrong tense.

6- That’s too formal. You were asked to write a letter to a friend.

You can revise your letter and post the amended version below if you like.

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Thank you very much for your helps, it is very useful. I will check it soon

Your welcome.

Thank you very much for your (1)help.(2) s, it It is very useful. I will check it soon.

1- Note that the noun “help” is not countable.

2- The original was a comma splice error. The comma was wrong there. You should use a full stop to separate two independent clauses, or (if possible) join them with a suitable coordinating conjunction.