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Chemistry



Considered as six elements of life



Today it’s about life itself



About making the world



A better place

I dont know if its content and grammar makes sense and sounds natural enough to an English native speaker. Could anyone drop any suggestions for me.

Many thanks.

Joe

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JosephineinJapan
Chemistry



Considered as six elements of life



Today it’s about life itself



About making the world



A better place

I dont know if its content and grammar makes sense and sounds natural enough to an English native speaker. Could anyone drop any suggestions for me.

Many thanks.

Joe

Dupont was successful with a very short slogan back in the 60's: "Better living through chemistry".
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But aren't there well over 100 elements? 118, I think? How do the six elements factor in?
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How about . . .

Chemistry

Six elements of life itself

Making the world better

Or

Chemistry: Making the world better, six elements at a time.
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