Meaning of this thesis: The lack of the thorough investigation of the category of the disease of stomach pain has caused the insufficient use of the relative literature source. The phenomenon of the intermingling of the good and bad of the relative literature influences the utilization of it. The lack of rigorous and scientific sieving methods influences the development process of new clinical drugs. The lack of concise and scientific evaluation methods influences the quality of the new Chinese materia medica.
MapleThe lack of the thorough investigation of the category of the disease of stomach pains has caused the insufficient use of the relative (what do you mean?) literature source. The phenomenon of the intermingling of the good and bad of the relative literature influences the utilization of it. The lack of rigorous and scientific sieving methods influences the development process of new clinical drugs. The lack of (You used "the lack of" once. Try rephrasing this.) concise and scientific evaluation methods influences the quality of the new Chinese materia medica. Research methodology:The author does the following work to complete the thesis. Arrangement of the literature of the stomach painSeiving of the recipes for stomach pain therapy (not complete sentences)
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MapleThe lack of the thorough investigation of the category of the disease of stomach pains has caused the insufficient use of the relative (what do you mean?) literature source. The phenomenon of the intermingling of the good and bad of the relative literature influences the utilization of it. The lack of rigorous and scientific sieving methods influences the development process of new clinical drugs. The lack of (You used "the lack of" once. Try rephrasing this.) concise and scientific evaluation methods influences the quality of the new Chinese materia medica. Research methodology:The author does the following work to complete the thesis. Arrangement of the literature of the stomach painSeiving of the recipes for stomach pain therapy (not complete sentences)

Firstly, let me say sorry for the fragments at the end of my paragraph, which was caused by wrong format actually; while I pasted contents from my word file, the format changed strangely.

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I'll change it into the following:

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Meanings:

The lack of thorough investigation into the classification of the disease of stomach pains has caused the insufficient use of relative TCM literature resources. The phenomenon of the intermingling of good and bad of TCM literature influences the utilization of it. The lack of rigorous and scientific sieving methods slows down the development process of new clinical medicine. The deficiency of concise and scientific evaluation methods decreases the quality of the new Chinese materia medica.

Methods:

Arrangement of the literature of stomach pains;
Seiving of the formulae for stomach pains;

Evaluation of effectiveness of the formulae for stomach pains.

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Arrangement of the literature of stomach pains;
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Seiving of the formulae for treating(?) stomach pains;


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Seiving of the formulae for treating(?) stomach pains. Yes, treating.

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