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Don't let negativity disempower or influence you. Empower yourself by ignoring hysteria. Live in the moment.

Don't let negativity disempower or influence you. Instead, empower yourself by ignoring hysteria, and live in the moment.

Can the underlined elements stand as written or should they be connected with conjunctions or other punctuation ? Does it matter either way?


Would we class them as imperatives as written also ?



Is once like as (starting a dependent part of the sentence).


Once this race is over, it will vanish like nothing ever happened.
As I've said before, it will vanish like nothing ever happened.


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Don't let negativity disempower or influence you. Empower yourself by ignoring hysteria. Live in the moment.

Don't let negativity disempower or influence you. Instead, empower yourself by ignoring hysteria, and live in the moment.

Can the underlined elements stand as written Yes or should they be connected with conjunctions or other punctuation? That's not necessary. But it's betterto use exclaation marks instead of periods.

Does it matter either way? It's up to you.


Would we class them as imperatives as written also? Yes. I'd use exclamation marks.



Is once like as (starting a dependent part of the sentence Yes ).


Once this race is over, it will vanish like nothing ever happened. Once here is like 'as soon as'. or after.

How does a race vanish?


As I've said before, it will vanish like nothing ever happened. As here means in the way that.


Clive