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Hi, I'm going to keep this post updated. Thanks before for helping Emotion: embarrassed

"It was 17.30 pm till I heard the sound of car being stopped in front our house."(is this right?)

"Back 2 weeks before, my aunt called one afternoon offering my mom to take care of a girl baby." (this sentence sounds weird,any suggestions??)

"her father passed away while she was still a three months _______(embryo?) in her mom’s stomach" (is this right?)

"her mom couldn’t afford buying her stuff, since she still have 3 other kids that need to be take care of." (is this right?)
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It was 5:30 pm when I heard the sound of car stopping in front our house.

Two weeks ago, my aunt called one afternoon to offer to take care of a girl baby for my mother. ('one of my mom's baby daughters'?)

Her father passed away while she was just a three-month-old fetus in her mother's womb.

Her mother couldn't afford to buy her anything, since she also had three other children to take care of.
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Mister MicawberTwo weeks ago, my aunt called one afternoon to offer to take care of a girl baby for my mother. ('one of my mom's baby daughters'?)
Dear Mr Micawber, thanks for helping.

what I mean is,
my aunt called asking my mom whether she(my mom) want to take care of this baby girl or not.
Two weeks ago, my aunt called one afternoon to ask if I mother wanted to take care of a baby girl.