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To Whom It May Concern:

I have known XXX since 2005 when he joined XXX, a electronic project. He worked on various tasks under my supervision for two years. I have been impressed by both XXX's attitude towards his work and his performance on the job.

He has the analytical skills to diagnose problems and identify viable solutions and that has contributed to the success of the project. Like any other projects, our project faced several challenges during the development and thankfully, due to the dedication of the engineers and managers, we were able to overcome them. During the periods, he made personal sacrifices that allow the project to continue moving forward. He has also shown his ability to work independently as well as in a team.

I recommend him for employment without reservation. Please let me know if you need further information.

Please help me correct any grammatical mistakes. You won't be held responsible for the accuracy of the content. Emotion: smile
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1. I have known *** since 2005 when he joined ***, a an electronic project.
2. During the periods - why plural?
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AnonymousTo Whom It May Concern:

I have known XXX since 2005 when he joined XXX, a electronic project. He worked on various tasks under my supervision for two years. I have been impressed by both XXX's attitude towards his work and his performance on the job.

He has the analytical skills to diagnose problems and identify viable solutions and that has contributed to the success of the project. Like any other projects, our project faced several challenges during the development and thankfully, due to the dedication of the engineers and managers, we were able to overcome them. During the periods, he made personal sacrifices that allow the project to continue moving forward. He has also shown his ability to work independently as well as in a team.

I recommend him for employment without reservation. Please let me know if you need further information.

Please help me correct any grammatical mistakes. You won't be held responsible for the accuracy of the content. Emotion: smile

Hi,

Since you don’t need any other comments, I will only say this. Generally speaking, the grammar is fine. But ……
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Hi Goodman, if you have any comments, i'd like to hear them. Thanks
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Anonymous
To Whom It May Concern:

I have known XXX since 2005 when he joined XXX, an electronic project engieering firm. Mr. XXX has been working under my supervision for two years. During this time, he has taken on several major projects with convincingly impressive results. XXX has demonstrated his ability and professional attitude in his work and his performance on the job.

He has the analytical skills to diagnose problems and identify viable solutions and that has contributed to the success of the project. Like any other projects, our project faced several challenges during the development and thankfully, due to the dedication of the engineers and managers, we were able to overcome them. During the periods, he made personal sacrifices that allow the project to continue moving forward. He has also shown his ability to work independently as well as in a team.

I recommend him for employment without reservation. Please let me know if you need further information.

Please help me correct any grammatical mistakes. You won't be held responsible for the accuracy of the content. Emotion: smile

Hi,

Since you don’t need any other comments, I will only say this. Generally speaking, the grammar is fine. But ……

There were a couple of simple errors Hao already pointed out. I thought the tone was a bit patronizing becasue of the seemingly excessive positive description, and the sentences structure can be improve to make it sound a little more beievable. I rewrote the first paragraph for reference.

To Whom It May Concern:

I have known XXX since 2005 when he joined XXX, an electronic project engieering firm. Mr. XXX has been working under my supervision for two years. During this time, he has taken on several major projects with convincingl results. XXX has demonstrated his ability and professional attitude in his work and his performance on the job.
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