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Dear all,

please corect grammer this mu passage! thank alot!

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My name is Tu, i was born and growned in Dka Provicen.In 1999 i joined in PIT university, in here my major was IT.i gradurated in last 2003.Begining of 2004 i am joined HTCC Company, my main works is consultance and sales IT products, such as PC, Servers and EPR solutions. HTCC is small company, the enveroment is not enounght to develop my career in future. Beging of 2005, i was joined in FYYY corporation, i am beging my job in implement consultance ERP solutions.My main work is survey business system of our clients and give their solutions apply ERP to manager your company.

Thank for your help.
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Please correct the grammar in this passage! Thanks a lot!

My name is Tu. I was born and grew up in Dka Province. In 1999, I enrolled at PIT University, where my major was IT. I graduated in 2003. At the beginning of 2004, I joined HTCC Company. My main work was consulting and sales of IT products such as PCs, servers and EPR solutions. HTCC is a small company, and the environment was not conducive to the further development of my career, so in 2005, I joined FYYY corporation. At FYYY, I am a consultant regarding ERP solutions. My main work is surveying the business systems of our clients and offering ERP solutions to their management.

Thanks for your help.
Thanks Mister,

Please help me continute correct grammer in this pasages.

After that, i moved to Sales department, i was working in pre-sales team, where, my main work was consulted erp solutions to our clients. we must convince client accept our solutions.i supported saleman was focus to potentiality customers, such as who are clients appropriate with our solutions.
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You don't seem to have learned anything from my last correction. The least you can do is correct all your i 's to I 's and fix the spelling of grammar. You have only used one capital letter in the whole passage (Sales)-- please find a couple more. Please try a little harder.
Dear Mister,

Please correct grammer this my passage, thanks alot!

After that, I moved to Sales department, I was working in pre-sales team, where, my main work was consulted erp solutions to our clients. We must convince client accept our solutions.I supported saleman was focus to potentiality customers, such as who are clients appropriate with our solutions.
After that, I moved to the Sales Department, where I worked as a member of the pre-sales team. My main assignment was consultation with clients regarding ERP solutions. I supported the salemen by focusing on potential customers whose problems were appropriate to our solutions.

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Thanks Mister
My name is Tu. I was born and brought up at Dka Provicen. In 1999, I joined in PIT University and selected IT as my major subject. I completed my graduation in the year 2003. In the year 2004, initially I joined in HTCC Company and my nature of job is consultancy and sales of IT products such as PC, Servers and EPR solutions. As the HTCC is a small company and the environment is not good enough to develop my career, I switch on to FYYY corporation in the year 2005.I started my job in implement consultancy ERP Solutions. My main works is survey business system of our clients and give solutions. I have applied ERP to manager in your company.

Thank you for your help.
My name is Tu. I was born and raised in Dka Provicen. In 1999, I entered PIT University and majored in Information Technology . I graduated in 2003, and in 2004 I joined HTCC Company as a sales consultant for IT products such as PCs, servers and EPR solutions. In 2005, I became an ERP solutions consulant in FYYY Corporation, a larger company. My main work is surveying client business systems and offering solutions.

I am now applying for a position as ERP manager at your company.
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