Topic: Today many young women choose to stay single. What do you think are the reasons for this new trend? Write an essay between 300 and 350 words about what many lead to one woman’s decision not to marry.Quynh, who is still very young in her twenties, desires to do a lot of remarkable things such as studying to become a successful manageress, travelling around the world and devoting to charity program for children. Thus, she does not want to fix her life to a marriage. This is also the choice of many other women at her same age. They – who have had more chances to lead their life in their own way choose to stay single so that they can put all their energies into social and career life without worrying the possible difficulties of family life.Looking back at the society ages ago, women were not allowed to get beyond the bounds of familial principles. All they could do was to obey their parents’ guides, and then their husbands’. Living such a life may lead women to inactiveness and depression. Therefore, when doors are open for them to decide on their life, they naturally turn themselves towards the joys of little commitment and pressure. That’s the time they can take all their chances for travelling and having parties, or spend all their money on clothes and make-up. In addition, the fact that women have gradually gained the equal roles as men in the integrated society encourages them to urge for much more improvement. These women become so workaholic that they think they have little time for anything else. Related to the first reasons, family life now has been considered a burden to young women in some cases. They seem to be afraid of caring about the household, financial problems and children because these may take a lot of time for their own. The lack of private time not only limits their free life but also results in their little devotion to the job. Moreover, the mass media has talked continually about home violence which has physical and mental influence on all suffered women. As a result, many young women still keep unmarried to protect themselves.To wrap up, a considerable number of young women now avoid strain their life by not coming to a marriage. They preferably lead a free life without worrying to be a victim of any home violence case, at the same time; they can absolutely be dedicated to their own career.
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Topic: Today many young women choose to stay single. What do you think are the reasons for this new trend? Write an essay between 300 and 350 words about what many lead to one woman’s decision not to marry.

Quynh, who is still very young in her twenties, desires to do a lot of remarkable things such as studying to become a successful manageress, travelling around the world and devoting to charity program for children. Thus, she does not want to fix her life to a marriage. This is also the choice of many other women at her same age. They – who have had more chances to lead their life in their own way choose to stay single so that they can put all their energies into social and career life without worrying the possible difficulties of family life. Looking back at the society ages ago, women were not allowed to get beyond the bounds of familial principles. All they could do was to obey their parents’ guides, and then their husbands’. Living such a life may lead women to inactiveness and depression.* Therefore, when doors are open for them to decide on their life, they naturally turn themselves towards the joys of little commitment and pressure.** That’s the time they can take all their chances for travelling and having parties, or spend all their money on clothes and make-up.*** In addition, the fact that women have gradually gained the equal roles as men in the integrated society encourages them to urge for much more improvement. These women become so workaholic that they think they have little time for anything else. Related to the first reasons, family life now has been considered a burden to some young women in some cases. They seem to be afraid of caring about the household, financial problems and children because these may take a lot of time for their own. The lack of private time not only limits their free life but also results in their little devotion to the job. Moreover, the mass media has talked continually about home violence which has physical and mental influence on all suffered women. As a result, many young women still keep unmarried to protect themselves.**** To wrap up, a considerable number of young women now avoid strain their life by not coming to a marriage. They preferably lead a free life without worrying to be a victim of any home violence case, at the same time; they can absolutely be dedicated to their own career.

* I suggest more women suffer from depression today than in the past, so this may not be a good argument.

** You don't think a successful career brings pressure??

*** Spend their money on clothes and make-up? What about buying a home of their own, or Quynh, who wants to donate to charity? This is an absurd statement

**** I don't think you'll find many people saying "I didn't marry because I was afraid of domestic violence." Do you have survey data to back this up?
Thank you very much for your comments. I think I have much to take into consideration now. Writing a convincing essay is always a hard task for me Emotion: smile

Have a nice day!