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I would like to inform you that Zahra Technology / Business Connection wants to arrange a business meeting with you to discuss our future relations about Security System.
Mr. Samir H.Sajwani / Managing Director is presenting the Meeting. Please confirm as soon as possible your convenient time. I hope I’ll receive a quick respond from your side.
I look forward to meeting with you.
my dears pls correct this letter into a attractive business letter.... its urgent.. i need it within few hours... pls reply n correct it soon...
I would like to inform you that Zahra Technology / Business Connection (I think you shouldn't use / here) wants to arrange a business meeting with you to discuss our future relations about Security System.
Mr. Samir H.Sajwani, Managing Director, is presenting the Meeting. Please confirm
I am looking forward to meeting with you.
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well i received ur reply late but it will helps me in future......
thanx again dearsss
Anonymous:Dear Ms. Carmel,
Reference to our tele-conversation, we would like to set a meeting with Mr. Tony Fernandes to check the possibility if we can build a new business relationship with your esteemed company.
Please confirm to us your convenient time. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Pls check if it needs rephrazing.appreciate the help
Anonymous:you should not have at the end "I am looking to meeting you" since it is obvious that the person who wrote the email is only arranging the meeting for 2 other people. s/he is not part of the meeting.
This refers to the meeting held on 27 August 2012 with our director Mr. Shabbir Gheewala (Fancy Glass Industries Pvt. Ltd.) , regarding the ongoing residential project at chichpokli, Let me inform you on behalf of our sir that the meeting was very was so nice, & also thanks for your kind cooperation. Also sending our company profile for your reference
Thanks & Regards
Pls correct the letter as early as possible.
The meeting held on August 27th with our director, Mr. Shabbir Gheewala, of Fancy Glass Industries Pvt. Ltd, regarding the ongoing residential project at Chichpokli was very informative, and we thank you for your kind cooperation.
I am sending our company profile for your reference.
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