Hey Friends,

I am not sure my verbs is correct in this paragraphs.

Would you please someone tell me my mistakes? Thank you.

All of people like to be (seems) beautiful. Beauty gives confidence to human, so for this purpose everyone try to look beautiful. Style of dress(dressing), manner of talking, use (using) of perfume, having strong muscles, shaving, these are manners that people use to attract others attention. The other manner for attracting others attention is having Tattoo.

For the social marketing project we had to chose a topic from a list of health and safety problems. There were three modes of persuasion in this project, rational, emotional and ethical appeal. Type of audience specify which appeal is proper for them. In first step I had to considered my audience and then I should found where I could reach my audience.

I did some research about tattoo’s problems. I made a questionnaire and put them in a tattoo shop in the West Edmonton Mall. After three days 18 questionnaire are filed.

The audience that I have chosen are those people who are interested in to having big and strong muscles. These group use tattoo to emphasis on their muscles and bodies. Then I faced with this question which where are my audiences? I found that these people are in some places like body building clubs and LRT stations. As a result I have chosen three media Poster, Magazine (Vanity Fair and Maxim) and website banner to convey my theme and message.
All people like to be beautiful. Beauty gives people confidence, so for this purpose everyone tries to look beautiful. Their style of dressing, manner of talking, use of perfume, having strong muscles, shaving; these are all ways that people use to attract attention. Another way to attract attention is to have a tattoo.

For the social marketing project we had to chose a topic from a list of health and safety problems. There were three modes of persuasion in this project, rational, emotional and ethical appeal. The type of audience specifies which appeal is appropriate for them. For the first step I had to consider my audience and find where I could reach my audience.

I did some research about problems with tattoos . I made a questionnaire and put them in a tattoo shop in the West Edmonton Mall. After three days, 18 questionnaire were returned.

The audience that I have chosen are those people who are interested in having big and strong muscles. This group uses tattoo to emphasis their muscles and bodies. Then I faced this question; where are my audiences? I found that these people are in some places like body building clubs and LRT stations. As a result I have chosen three media; Posters, Magazines (Vanity Fair and Maxim) and website banners to convey my theme and message.
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So can we add plural -s to audiance?
Yes in some circumstances. Don't forget that one audience, although made up of many people, is still a single entity.

It would refer to different audiences only.