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I request you to edit the text below. It would be very kind of you. Thanks.

I have always been trapped between these battles of demons and angels and all this is happening iside my minf where I lead both sides. No one is going to win because I don't which side to take side with. And through/throughout all these internal warfares God has been a calm spectator, watching satisfactorily his child being ravaged and consumed by his own sorrows and pains.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

I have always been trapped between these battles of demons and angels and all this is happening iside my minf where I lead both sides. No one is going to win because I don't which side to take side with. And through/throughout all these internal warfares God has been a calm spectator, watching satisfactorily his child being ravaged and consumed by his own sorrows and pains.
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I have always been trapped between these battles of demons and angels, and all this is happening inside my mind where I lead both sides. No one is going to win this war because I don't know which side to take side with. And through/throughout all these internal warfares God has
been a calm spectator, watching satisfactorily His child being ravaged and consumed by his own sorrows and pains.
Thanks a lot, Mr Micawber.

I have corrected some spelling mistakes. The reason for these careless spelling mistakes is that I made the original post on my mobile phone . Now it would be kind of you if you coud help me with other underlined problem sections. Thanks.
How about your trying to fix them first? And wait until you get to a computer. Doing English work on your mobile phone is like doing your math homework with your fingers and toes: not a very serious effort.
Hi Mr Micawber

I'm on my computer now. I have read it again and didn't find anything wrong with it. Obviously, there are mistakes that's the reason you underlined them. Could you please help me now? I'm genuinely interested to correct my mistakes.
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I have always been trapped in these battles of demons and angels, and all this is happening inside my mind, where I lead both sides. No one is going to win, because I don't which side to champion. And through/throughout all these internal warfares God has been a calm spectator, watching with satisfaction his child being ravaged and consumed by his own sorrows and pains.