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What have you done that has most surprised the people around you? Use reasons and examples to support your response.
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When I graduated from high school, I had to choose between staying at home or going abroad for study. For personal reasons, I had chosen to go abroad. There were people that I know who though I would not make it due to my lack of experience and being young.

I went to India for my bachelor program. However, the country was not what I had in mind. The population was extremely large and the city was very crowded. It was very hard to communicate with the people since their language was not English. The teacher changes the language when lecturing which became very hard to understand the topic. I was in no position to give up since my family believed in me.
I started to learn Urdu and English as I will be able to understand the people and avoid being deceived. The time passed and I started to see the outcomes from my efforts. I joined computer institutions and I learnt more about programing. My mind changed since I saw the results of my struggles. After finishing my Bcholer from India, I got an admission in the U.S in master's program. People were blown away when they saw the positive outcomes from my hard work in the past few years and what was most surprising is that I was still young.
In life, we can surprise people by the orientation we give to our thoughts and feelings, and the activities on which we choose to spend our energies . We should not give up on our goals or allowed anyone to make us give up.
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When I graduated from high school, I had to choose between staying at home or going abroad for study. For personal reasons, I had chosen to go abroad. There were people that I knew who though I would not make it due to my lack of experience and being young.

I went to India for my bachelor program. However, the country was not what I had in mind. The population was extremely large and the city was very crowded. It was very hard to communicate with the people since their language was not English. The teacher changed the language when lecturing which became very hard to understand the topic. I was in no position to give up since my family believed in me.




I started to learn Urdu and English to be able to understand the people and avoid being deceived. The time passed and I started to see the outcomes from my efforts. I joined computer institutions and I learnt more about programing. My mind changed since I saw the results of my struggles. After finishing my Bcholer from/in India, I got an admission in the U.S in master's program. People were blown away when they saw the positive outcomes from my hard work in the past few years and what was most surprising is that I was still young.

In life, we can surprise people by the orientation we give to our thoughts and feelings, and the activities on which we choose to spend our energies . We should not give up our goals or allow anyone to make us give up.

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I enjoyed it greatly
Lika,
Thanks for giving time for my essay.
I am really thankful. I learned a lot from your corrections.
Thanks