After Today

After today there will be no bombing

Tomorrow will be singing and dancing

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11th September will be a memory

No more death and tears in my metonymy

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But there will be a big challenge

How to organize our package

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Please factions and parties

Do not give a chance to our enemies

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Could you be united?

Under the flag of our beloved

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You have a holly duty

How to organize our land and make it full of beauty

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However we do not want it to be new Palestine

In order to forget what is bigger more than our small Palestine

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We do not want Gaza to be the first and the last

Gaza is the first, but not the last

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Gaza pull out is the resistance son

Whom our heroes with their struggle have born

Injured Palestine
Hello, Injured Palestine.

Yes, After Today is a good title.

Holy is spelled thus.

Bigger more than is odd.
Dear Mister Micawber,

Thank you very much for checking my spelling, but I did not get what do you mean of Bigger more than is odd.

All the best,

Injured Palestine
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Bigger more does not sound like natural English to me, Injuredpalestine, and I do not understand quite what you wish to say in this couplet:

However we do not want it to be new Palestine
In order to forget what is bigger more
than our small Palestine

Could you paraphrase it for me? Then I will help you correct it.
Dear Mister Micawber,

Now I have got what do you mean. First of all it was a printing mistake, I wanted to say " In order NOT to forget something bigger than our small palestine, I mean by small palestine here GAZA after the Israeli pull out from Gaza. so I wanted to draw the attention to what comes after re-freeing Gaza from the Israeli occupation. Which is the whole of Palestine. So I wanted every body to take care and keep going to re-free the whole country from the occupation.

If you can correct it in order to be more convincible, I will be very grateful.

Best Regards,

Injured Palestine
Then you don't need both words, more and bigger. How about something like:

However we do not want it to be a new Palestine
If we forget what is bigger (greater)
than our small Palestine

Or however you'd like to phrase it- anyway, you just need bigger.

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Hi

Thank you very much for your effective comments. I will adopt;

However we do not want it to be a new Palestine
If we forget what is bigger (greater) than our small Palestine


But I don't know how to edit it plz tell me how?