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Hi,

Question:
Which sentences are correct?

Which sentence is the best?

Sentence1:

While I was in the US, I submitted my resumé for the graduate trainee position on 21st February.
Sentence2:

When I was in the US, I submitted my resumé for the graduate trainee position on 21st February.
Sentence3:

I submitted my resumé for the graduate trainee position on 21st February, while I was in the US.
Sentence4:

I submitted my resumé for the graduate trainee position on 21st February, when I was in the US.

Thanks
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I prefer while to when but you need an article before 21st. (the 21st of February or February 21st)
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hi,

Thank you for your reply.

Do you think sentence 1 have any problem?
Dates are usually written in the following format -the 21st of February or February 21st.

21st February is wrong.