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In the following sentence there are some mistakes in the pink words ,

Could you explain to me where they are .? Thank you

When a country in an early stage of economic developemnt investements

in fixed capital are vital .



The fact is that sophisticated technology has become put of the revolution in

travel delivery systems has npot made travel shedules less hectic

Sesyom
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country is (in the first)

no is and npot , put is part, schedules (in the 2nd)
This is my revision of your writing.

When a country is in an early stage of economic development, investments in fixed capital are vital to the country's economic health.

The fact is that sophisticated technology has become part of the revolution in travel delivery systems that has helped to make one's travel schedule less hectic.

Again, I welcome any inputs on mine.
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The second sentence seems to mean that despite the fact that sophisticated technology has become part of the travel delivery system, travel schedules are just as hectic as ever.

The fact that sophisticated technology has become part of the revolution in travel delivery systems has not made travel schedules less hectic.
Hi, Davkett

With all due respect, your revised sentence does not seem to be clear.

The fact (that sophisticated technology has become part of the revolution in travel delivery systems) has not made travel schedules less hectic.

This does not seem to be what the original poster wanted say. I am writing this with all due respect.
Hi Believer, here is how I understand the intent--

Sophisticated technology has become part of the revolution in travel delivery systems, BUT the technology has had little effect on the hectic nature of travel scheduling.

The intent is to say that despite the introduction of sophisicated technology, not much improvement has occurred in the system. Travel schedules are just as hectic as ever. (This happens a lot in the modern world, don't you think?)

It's true, I would feel a little more comfortable writing that it is the 'technology', not the 'fact', that has failed to make schedules less hectic. But I'm not sure that's your objection. You seem to think that the statement intends to say that technology has helped to reduce the hectic nature of travel schedules.
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Thank you.

Yes, I would have been more comfortable seeing a sentence that pointed to the technology as the cause that failed to make schedules less hectic, but anyway, I understood your intent and now feel that your understanding of the orginal poster's sentence is highly plausible.
With the first sentence, i think so the mistake in "fixed", you can repair it as like this:
When a country inan early stage of development , investment in fixative capital are vital
SesyomIn the following sentence there are some mistakes in the pink words ,
Could you explain to me where they are .? Thank you
When a country in an early stage of economic developemnt investements
in fixed capital are vital .

The fact is that sophisticated technology has become put of the revolution in
travel delivery systems has npot made travel shedules less hectic
Sesyom
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