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Here with attaching a document after updating the requirements

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Here with attaching a document after the requirements have been updated.
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s s sridhar,

Sorry, but I am not sure what you are trying to convey.

1) Here is a document where the requirements have been updated?

2) I have attached an updated document.

Maybe it is "business speak"....

3) Attached please find a document with the requirements updated?

I am not sure about "with attaching" and "requirements being updated". Which requirements? Requirements for what? What is the document attached to? Is it an attachment to an e-mail?

I usually refrain from using "business speak" and use more direct methods as shown in either ( 1 ) or ( 2 ).

If I have completey misinterpreted your message (very likely), please rephrase your message and someone will try again.

MountainHiker
MountainHiker,

Sorry for the lack of clarity. In fact, I am attaching a document with an email; hece I used the word "with attaching" (if any mistake in this, please let me know).

My actual doubt is whether to use "after updating the requirements " or "after the requirements have been updated".

Thanks
SS
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S S,

No need to apologize. We are all here to learn.

"With attaching" doesn't seem right to me.

I am attaching a document. Ok.
I have attached a document. Ok
I am enclosing a document. Ok
I have enclosed a document. Ok
I am sending this e-mail along with an attachment. Ok
I am sending this e-mail along with an enclosure. Ok

Here with attaching a document after updating the requirements

Or

Here with attaching a document after the requirements have been updated.


I would use one of the two following forms:

After updating the requirements, I have attached the document (for your review).

Or

After updating the requirements, I have enclosed the document (for your review).

Hope that helps.

MountainHiker
Thanks lot MountainHiker; I also noticed the order of sentence we have to maintain, that is first updating then enclosing. Am I right?

SS
S S,

No, you could change the order. You just need to change the wording slightly.

We had before.

1) After updating the requirements, I have attached the document (for your review).

Or

2) After updating the requirements, I have enclosed the document (for your review).

Now we could write..

3) I have attached the document with the updated requirements (for your review).

Or

4) I have enclosed the document with the updated requirements (for your review).

I hope that helps.

MountainHiker
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