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Hallo,

I would like to write the two sentences below. There are some sentences between them. Please note that I treat "reception" as an uncountable noun, and "RAKE" is a kind of signal reception. Could anyone tell me which one of 1), 2), 3), 4) and 5) is most appropriate? Thanks a lot in advance.

1) RAKE reception is performed at receiver A. .... (there exist a few sentences here).... Meanwhile, additional RAKE reception is performed at receiver B.

2) RAKE reception is performed at receiver A. .... (there exist a few sentences here) .... Meanwhile, further RAKE reception is performed at receiver B.

3) RAKE reception is performed at receiver A. .... (there exist a few sentences here) .... Meanwhile, such reception is also performed at receiver B.

4) RAKE reception is performed at receiver A. .... (there exist a few sentences here) .... Meanwhile, the RAKE reception is also performed at receiver B.

5) RAKE reception is performed at receiver A. .... (there exist a few sentences here) .... Meanwhile, RAKE reception is also performed at receiver B.
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Hi,

I would like to write the two sentences below. There are some sentences between them. Please note that I treat "reception" as an uncountable noun, and "RAKE" is a kind of signal reception. Could anyone tell me which one of 1), 2), 3), 4) and 5) is most appropriate? Thanks a lot in advance.

1) RAKE reception is performed at receiver A. .... (there exist a few sentences here).... Meanwhile, additional RAKE reception is performed at receiver B. I prefer this version.

2) RAKE reception is performed at receiver A. .... (there exist a few sentences here) .... Meanwhile, further RAKE reception is performed at receiver B.

3) RAKE reception is performed at receiver A. .... (there exist a few sentences here) .... Meanwhile, such reception is also performed at receiver B.

4) RAKE reception is performed at receiver A. .... (there exist a few sentences here) .... Meanwhile, the RAKE reception is also performed at receiver B.

5) RAKE reception is performed at receiver A. .... (there exist a few sentences here) .... Meanwhile, RAKE reception is also performed at receiver B. This is also OK

Clive
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If you want another opinion, my preferences agree completely with Clive's.

CJ