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As planned, we have modified the bed by lowering the bed base to 10 cm

As planned, we have modified, the bed by reducing the height of the bed base by 10 cm.

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In #2, you need to remove the comma after modified.

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Thank you for your kind help.

Do both sentences have same meaning? Please advise.

First, what do you think, please?

Clive

Oce again, thank you for your help.

I have doubt it, but I think they have different meaning. Please advise me.

Please see the context and advise which will fit it.

As per the request, the total bed height should be 65 cm, but the bed height from the ground to the mattress level was 75 cm, so then we lowered bed base by 10 cm.

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Let's assume the original height of the bed base was 25cm.

As planned, we have modified the bed by lowering (the height of) the bed base to 10 cm. The height is now 10cm.

As planned, we have modified the bed by reducing the height of the bed base by 10 cm. The height is now 15 cm.

Clive

Thank you for your detailed explanation.

I think I should write something like this.

As planned, we have modified the bed by shifting down the bed base by 10 cm.

Please check and advise.

As planned, we have modified the bed by lowering shifting down the bed base by 10 cm.


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